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You have only posted a few times here, so glad you are participating. The Critique Lounge rules state to post no more than three images, but I think four is close enough that we can let it go. These work really well in black and white, a style of photography that (in my opinion) is much harder than color.They are well processed with a good tonal range (another thing that is hard to do). The last three are really strong, with my eye led to a point of focus in the frame. By comparison the first one is a little busy. It's still a good shot but I find the clutter distracting in that my eye doesn't know where to land. I think if you had gone in tighter and vertical to emphasize the doorway, it might be improved. I also agree with [USER=58]@Aussie[/USER] that some lines need to be straightened, which can be done in the computer. Overall though nice job.
You have only posted a few times here, so glad you are participating. The Critique Lounge rules state to post no more than three images, but I think four is close enough that we can let it go.
These work really well in black and white, a style of photography that (in my opinion) is much harder than color.They are well processed with a good tonal range (another thing that is hard to do). The last three are really strong, with my eye led to a point of focus in the frame. By comparison the first one is a little busy. It's still a good shot but I find the clutter distracting in that my eye doesn't know where to land. I think if you had gone in tighter and vertical to emphasize the doorway, it might be improved. I also agree with [USER=58]@Aussie[/USER] that some lines need to be straightened, which can be done in the computer. Overall though nice job.
